Thursday, August 8, 2013

Your Interest Inventory


  • Where is the job located?
    • Photojournalism
    • The majority of photojournalists are freelancers and but there are attempt to sell to media outlets, such as magazines and newspapers. Though there are some national publications occasionally hire staff photographers to work as photojournalists.
  • About how much money can a person in that position expect to make?
    • $20,000 to $55,000 a year depending on who they sell their photos for and/or who they work for. A few of them make more, but that is rare. 
  • What skills are required?
    • You need a keen eye, a way with words, and a knack for putting the two together when writing your article. 
    • You must have a steady hand, when holding a camera.
    • You need to have experience with both taking photos and writing the story with information out on what your photo shows.
  • What level of education is required?
    • A formal education is not always necessary in order to pursue a photojournalism career. But you will need to earn Bachelor degrees in photography or journalism or both that should.
  • What kind of experience is expected?
    • You need to have experience at least in taking photos and writing stories other than that you really don’t need it.


Sourses:

Reporter's Notebook

I really don’t have a journalist that I admire but I have one who interests me and Liz Nagy is the one. Liz started out as a journalist in Charleston, Illinois as an anchor the weekend morning newscast. When she was done with that part of her life, she transferred to WEAR, the ABC affiliate in Pensacola, FL for a news anchor job. Though when Liz came to Miami, FL where she took part in several morning anchor positions in Channel 7 news that lasted for a few years and is there now.

With her level of experience has a bachelor’s degree in Broadcast Communications from Elon University which makes her perfect for the career she has right now.


  • How does this current job differ from the journalist’s previous news positions?
    • The only real difference is that now she mostly takes part as a reporter
  • How is this current job similar to the journalist’s previous new positions?
    • Her career now is similar to before because she still does take part in being an anchor. Her past position mainly takes place as anchors and reporters and she does the same nowadays.
  • Is this journalist at the top of his or her career, in your opinion? Explain your answer.
    • She is not at the top of her career, I think that she use to but soon enough she went downhill and well she was arrested for some things and well that’s that.
  • What duties must someone in this person’s position perform?
    • When she writes, she keeps all opinion out of the story and is fair to everyone involved. 

The Final Draft

Reading Maximum Ride, School’s Out Forever by James Patterson

When you are reading James Patterson’s easy-to-read, fast-paced Maximum Ride series, it’s a great way to past the time. He keeps the chapters short, and you find yourself turning the pages at a fast rate, keeping in line with the novel’s pace. Since I’ve just come off a streak of reading nonfiction books about genetic engineering, Patterson’s page turner was a relief. Max, Fang, Iggy, Gasman, Nudge, and Angel are back for a second round of action (after their first adventure in Maximum Ride, The Angel Experiment), running from Erasers (half-wolf, half-human experiments like The Flock but with wolves), outsmarting the Whitecoats (evil scientist bent on destroying the world and The Flock themselves.) The six genetically engineered bird kids and their talking dog, Total, they picked up where the last round left off. They have information that might lead them to their parents. Max’s Voice is driving her crazy. And, they’re going to school (the real kind).
Ari, is a 7-year-old Eraser, but is the size of a full grown human, and Jeb's only son. He had wings retrofitted on by the whitecoats in, School’s Out Forever. In The Angel Experiment, while fighting in the New York sewers, Max accidentally snaps Ari's neck and he supposedly died. However, at the School they fused the bones in his neck and brought him back to life, much to the dismay of the Flock. Ari, the genetically engineered Eraser (half-wolf, half-human), finally shows his human side.
This was the one thing the first book, The Angel Experiment, was lacking. We see that he is not just a monster, but he has retained his human feelings after all of his alterations. On the other hand, we are also should remember that Ari is a 7-year-old boy beneath that grown exterior.
One of the main events is when Fang is critically injured on the way to DC by a flying Eraser attack. They have no choice but to go to the hospital where their secret is discovered. The Flock is questioned by the FBI, and in return for Fang's treatment, Max reluctantly agrees for the Flock to stay with Anne Walker, an agent, until Fang recovers.
I conducted two interviews of a woman named Brinda Laya, who owns a bookstore in my neighborhood and Cody, a childhood friend of mine.
When I asked them of what they thoughts of Anne personally, they were quite similar. Cody deadpanned, “I just don’t like her. When she revealed that was Jeb’s boss, I started to hate her and still do hate her though, I do wonder what is going to happen to her later in the series.” Brinda shook her head, simple saying, “I don’t like Anne, that’s it. I won’t say anything else, I just don’t like her and that’s that.”
I wondered, when I read the book personally, why did Ari want to ‘take’ Max away so badly? Cody suggested, “I think it’s an obsession that Ari has with Max as she is his sister and wants to the only one to be with her.” Though Brinda says differently, “Ari wants Max to be his friend; he loves her a lot and wants to be alone with her for his whole life after all he is only 7 years old.
Most of the story was told through the eyes of Max. She becomes jealous of the FBI agent who takes them in and plays the mother role to the kids for a while. She becomes jealous, or at least mad, at the girl who kisses Fang at school.
Brinda declared, “I give the book 5 stars for the second sequel of Maximum Ride. I feel so excited when running in the same ride as Max and the Flocks. James Patterson is indeed an amazing writer. His stories made me not only flutter with excitement but also not predict what will happen next. Perhaps, this is one of the factors that make Maximum Ride become a bestselling book.”
Cody had a similar opinion on the story, “I read the book "School's out-Forever" by James Patterson and liked all of it just not one part. I would recommend this book to anyone who is a fan of James Patterson's work, or someone that enjoys reading books that are action-packed.
When interview both people, I asked them what their favorite character was. Brinda had said it was Max. “She seems like a great leader and a great role model. In the books they always say how Max was determined and she will win this fight. That shows that she doesn't give up and I like that about her. It also says how everyone looks up to her and the rest of the flock respect her and listen to her.”
Cody took a while to think about this, he stated that he didn’t have a favorite character but did have a least favored character, the youngest of The Flock, Angel. He explained, “She's just a 6 year old and she thinks she can lead the flock. When she doesn't get what she wants she tries to control they’re mind and change what their thinking. Sometimes it comes in handy when they're in trouble. But other times she doesn't use it for a good cause. She also tries to take over Max's spot as leader.
Continuing on, during the book series there was a substitute Max that replaced the real Max at one part book. OK the diabolical scale of 1 to 10, what do you rate of the fact that Max had been replaced by a substitute Max?  
Both interviewees agreed with each other on this topic. Brinda rated higher with a 9 and was convinced when Substitute Max was the real Max for some time before she learned when that it was not the real Max but the fake one while the real Max was captured by Jeb and The School. Cody rated a 7, “I really can’t tell the difference between both Max’s but only that their personalities are very different.”
When they were both finished with reading the book, I questioned what their contemplations were of Jeb and The School. Both had a similar outlook with saying they didn’t like both Jeb and The School in the end.
“I really don’t know what to think of Jeb, I used to think that he was a cool person who took in the Flock but at the same time not a good parent when he left Ari behind. Now The School, I think it’s a sick place when they performed (they still are) all the experiments with all the children and the clones and all that.” Brinda stated with an objectionable look on her face. Yet, Cody’s replay was short and simple, “I really can’t say anything on it but I do hate them both.”
Both interviews went very well, Brinda and Cody were very happy to give their opinions. With managed to get two points of views of the book from a male and a female and a general outlook from each person was a good idea. But Brinda seemed to have a better outlook on the story then Cody as he just skimmed through some parts of the book then actually read it when he confessed at the end of the interview.
When reading School’s Out Forever, Patterson focuses on character development throughout most of the book. The major storyline left off in the same place that it began. It’s hard not to like the action. Not to like the easy-flowing style.

Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Revised Draft

Reading Maximum Ride, School’s Out Forever by James Patterson

When you are reading James Patterson’s easy-to-read, fast-paced Maximum Ride series, it’s a great way to past the time. He keeps the chapters short, and you find yourself turning the pages at a fast rate, keeping in line with the novel’s pace. Since I’ve just come off a streak of reading nonfiction books about genetic engineering, Patterson’s page turner was a relief. Max, Fang, Iggy, Gasman, Nudge, and Angel are back for a second round of action (after their first adventure in Maximum Ride, The Angel Experiment), running from Erasers (half-wolf, half-human experiments like The Flock but with wolves), outsmarting the Whitecoats (evil scientist bent on destroying the world and The Flock themselves.) The six genetically engineered bird kids and their talking dog, Total, they picked up where the last round left off. They have information that might lead them to their parents. Max’s Voice is driving her crazy. And, they’re going to school (the real kind). Ari, the genetically engineered Eraser (half-wolf, half-human), finally shows his human side.
This was the one thing the first book, The Angel Experiment, was lacking. We see that he is not just a monster, but he has retained his human feelings after all of his alterations. On the other hand, we are also should remember that Ari is a 7-year-old boy beneath that grown exterior.
One of the main events is when Fang is critically injured on the way to DC by a flying Eraser attack. They have no choice but to go to the hospital where their secret is discovered. The Flock is questioned by the FBI, and in return for Fang's treatment, Max reluctantly agrees for the Flock to stay with Anne Walker, an agent, until Fang recovers.
I conducted two interviews of a woman named Brinda Laya, who owns a bookstore in my neighborhood and Cody, a childhood friend of mine.
When I asked them of what they thoughts of Anne personally, they were quite similar. Cody deadpanned, “I just don’t like her. When she revealed that was Jeb’s boss, I started to hate her and still do hate her though, I do wonder what is going to happen to her later in the series.” Brinda shook her head, simple saying, “I don’t like Anne, that’s it. I won’t say anything else, I just don’t like her and that’s that.”
I wondered, when I read the book personally, why did Ari want to ‘take’ Max away so badly? Cody suggested, “I think it’s an obsession that Ari has with Max as she is his sister and wants to the only one to be with her.” Though Brinda says differently, “Ari wants Max to be his friend; he loves her a lot and wants to be alone with her for his whole life after all he is only 7 years old.
Most of the story was told through the eyes of Max. She becomes jealous of the FBI agent who takes them in and plays the mother role to the kids for a while. She becomes jealous, or at least mad, at the girl who kisses Fang at school.
Brinda declared, “I give the book 5 stars for the second sequel of Maximum Ride. I feel so excited when running in the same ride as Max and the Flocks. James Patterson is indeed an amazing writer. His stories made me not only flutter with excitement but also not predict what will happen next. Perhaps, this is one of the factors that make Maximum Ride become a bestselling book.”
Cody had a similar opinion on the story, “I read the book "School's out-Forever" by James Patterson and liked all of it just not one part. I would recommend this book to anyone who is a fan of James Patterson's work, or someone that enjoys reading books that are action-packed.
When interview both people, I asked them what their favorite character was. Brinda had said it was Max. “She seems like a great leader and a great role model. In the books they always say how Max was determined and she will win this fight. That shows that she doesn't give up and I like that about her. It also says how everyone looks up to her and the rest of the flock respect her and listen to her.”
Cody took a while to think about this, he stated that he didn’t have a favorite character but did have a least favored character, the youngest of The Flock, Angel. He explained, “She's just a 6 year old and she thinks she can lead the flock. When she doesn't get what she wants she tries to control they’re mind and change what their thinking. Sometimes it comes in handy when they're in trouble. But other times she doesn't use it for a good cause. She also tries to take over Max's spot as leader.
Continuing on, during the book series there was a substitute Max that replaced the real Max at one part book. OK the diabolical scale of 1 to 10, what do you rate of the fact that Max had been replaced by a substitute Max?  
Both interviewees agreed with each other on this topic. Brinda rated higher with a 9 and was convinced when Substitute Max was the real Max for some time before she learned when that it was not the real Max but the fake one while the real Max was captured by Jeb and The School. Cody rated a 7, “I really can’t tell the difference between both Max’s but only that their personalities are very different.”
When they were both finished with reading the book, I questioned what their contemplations were of Jeb and The School. Both had a similar outlook with saying they didn't like both Jeb and The School in the end.
“I really don’t know what to think of Jeb, I used to think that he was a cool person who took in the Flock but at the same time not a good parent when he left Ari behind. Now The School, I think it’s a sick place when they performed (they still are) all the experiments with all the children and the clones and all that.” Brinda stated with an objectionable look on her face. Yet, Cody’s replay was short and simple, “I really can’t say anything on it but I do hate them both.”
Both interviews went very well, Brinda and Cody were very happy to give their opinions. With managed to get two points of views of the book from a male and a female and a general outlook from each person was a good idea. But Brinda seemed to have a better outlook on the story then Cody as he just skimmed through some parts of the book then actually read it when he confessed at the end of the interview.
When reading School’s Out Forever, Patterson focuses on character development throughout most of the book. The major storyline left off in the same place that it began. It’s hard not to like the action. Not to like the easy-flowing style.

Content Editing and Copyediting


  • When I read this story, I wonder:
    • How do people get depression? Is it genetic or an emotional thing?
  • After reading this story, I still want to know:
    • Are there any other problems when depression appears?
  • I felt confused when I read (explain why):
    • None, it was thoughtful and easy to understand when I read it.
  • I needed to look up the following things to understand them:
    • There are some organizations that I've never heard of so I want to do some research of them.
  • I learned the following things from this story:
    • Certain facts on depression
    • Depression  is a bad thing to have
    • A hotline to where I could call if I would ever get diagnose with Depression
  • My favorite part of this story was:
    • “If you feel that you may be depressed or that your teen may be depressed, I urge you to get help and get educated. For the National Suicide Prevention Lifeline, please call 1-800-273-8255.”
    • I like how you put some information so others can help their friends or themselves.
  • This story seems to express (opinion or no opinion):
    • No opinion, just info on the topic at hand.
  • The following lines may contain errors in grammar (be specific):
    • None
  • The following lines may contain errors in spelling (be specific):
    • Hashtag- needs to have a – in between the word
    • Instagram- if it is a sight, you need to add the .com or .net thing
  • The following lines may contain errors in punctuation (be specific):
    • None
  • The following lines may contain errors in style (be specific):
    • None
  • The following lines may suggest opinion, bias, or prejudice (be specific):
    • None
  • Include a closing paragraph of thoughts below that includes two questions, two compliments, and two suggestions for how to improve.
    • How do people get depression? Are there any other problems when depression appears?
    • The essay is good; there are no errors in the essay. As well as no, opinion, bias, or prejudice against anyone or anything for that matter.
    • I really can’t say anything to improve on it but that you should use other words that are more colorful and not use too many of the same words over and over.


Reflective:
Working with Caridad was great, even though I found a lot of mistakes with my essay he pointed them out and I was able to make a way better essay then the first one. I found where my weak points stood in my writing as well as the errors that I needed to correct. Additionally, reading Caridad’s news story was remarkable because he is a wonderful writer; his news story pertaining to Depression is absorbing and captivating.  All in all, I have gained much knowledge about Caridad’s news story, while completing this assignment; I attained several writing skills and am able to better understand where my weakness is so that I can work on them.

Sunday, July 21, 2013

Lead Sentence and Outline

LEAD SENTENCE- It’s hard not to like James Patterson’s easy-to-read, fast-paced Maximum Ride series. He keeps the chapters short, and you find yourself turning the pages at a fast rate, keeping in line with the novel’s pace. Since I’ve just come off a streak of reading nonfiction books about genetic engineering, Patterson’s page turner was a relief.
OUTLINE-
Rest of First Paragraph: Somewhat of a summary of the book.


Second Paragraph: Describe what happens with some events.  Explain some events that happen in the story and how readers like and dislike about.


Third Paragraph: Incorporate the interviews. Provide an equal amount of info from both sources with the different opinions


Final Paragraph: Concluding thoughts: present a final statement that is free of bias and considers both opinions from sources and interviews with some reviews from online with permission as possible outcomes.

Thursday, July 18, 2013

Elements of a Good Interview

Prepared Questions for Brinda Laya
  1. How do you like of the book, Maximum Ride- School’s Out Forever?
  2. Why do you think James Patterson wrote the book in the first place?
  3. Which character do you like best? Why?
  4. Why is it that Angel has so many powers and is still? What do you think about it?
  5. What do you think of Anne?
  6. Who do you think The Voice is? Explain?
  7. Why do you think Ari wanted to ‘take’ Max away so badly?
  8. Who do you think is going to end up with Max at the end of the whole series?
  9. On the diabolical scale of 1 to 10, what do you rate of the fact that Max had been replaced by a substitute Max? Why?
  10. At the end of the story, what do you think of Jeb and The School?


Actual Interview
  1. How do you like of the book, Maximum Ride- School’s Out Forever?
    1. I give the book five stars for the second sequel of Maximum Ride. I feel so excited when running in the same ride as Max and the Flocks. James Patterson is indeed an amazing writer. His story makes me not only flutter with excitement but also not predict what will happen next. Perhaps, this is one of the factors that make Maximum Ride become the best selling book.
  2. Why do you think James Patterson wrote the book in the first place?
    1. I think the author wrote this story because he wanted to enhance reading in children. This book is really good I started it on Wednesday and I am already in part II and should be done by Friday.
  3. Which character do you like best? Why?
    1. So far my favorite character is Max. She seems like a great leader and a great role model. In the books they always say how Max was determined and she will win this fight. That shows that she doesn't give up and I like that about her. It also says how everyone looks up to her and the rest of the flock respect her and listen to her. Also Max respects them and let's them do a lot of stuff to.
  4. Why is it that Angel has so many powers and is still? What do you think about it?
    1. I think that she is growing more powerful with every book and that will be a bigger player later in the series.
  5. What do you think of Anne?
    1. I don’t like Anne, that’s it. I won’t say anything else, I just don’t like her and that’s that.
  6. Who do you think The Voice is? Explain?
    1. I think it’s Angel, just because the way she acts and also she can read minds, the first book said so.
  7. Why do you think Ari wanted to ‘take’ Max away so badly?
    1. Ari wants Max to be his friend, he loves her a lot and wants to be alone with her for his whole life as he is only 7 years old.
  8. Who do you think is going to end up with Max at the end of the whole series?
    1. I am not sure, but I do hope she’ll end up with Fang as she has feelings Fang though that might change over time. You may never know.
  9. On the diabolical scale of 1 to 10, what do you rate of the fact that Max had been replaced by a substitute Max? Why?
    1. 6.5, I was convinced when Substitute Max was the real Max for some time before I learned when Max was captured by Jeb and The School.
  10. At the end of the story, what do you think of Jeb and The School?
    1. I really don’t know what to think of Jeb, I used to think that he was a cool person who took in the Flock but at the same time not a good parent when he left Ari behind. Now The School, I think it’s a sick place when they performed (they still are) all the experiments with all the children and the clones and all that.


Prepared Questions for Cody Lantz
  1. What do you like about, Maximum Ride- School’s Out Forever, the best?
  2. Why do you think James Patterson wrote the book in the first place?
  3. Which character do you like best? Why?
  4. Jeb say that Ari is Max’s brother, do you think that is true or not? Why?
  5. What do you think of Anne?
  6. Who do you think The Voice is? Explain?
  7. Why do you think Ari wanted to ‘take’ Max away so badly?
  8. Who do you think is going to end up with Max at the end of the whole series?
  9. On the diabolical scale of 1 to 10, what do you rate of the fact that Max had been replaced by a substitute Max? Why?
  10. At the end of the story, what do you think of Jeb and The School now?


Actual Interview
  1. What do you like about, Maximum Ride- School’s Out Forever?
    1. I read the book "School's out-Forever" by James Patterson and liked all of it just not one part. I would recommend this book to anyone who is a fan of James Patterson's work, or someone that enjoys reading books that are action-packed.
  2. Why do you think James Patterson wrote the book in the first place?
    1. I’m not sure why he wrote the book but  This book left me at the edge of my seat waiting to obtain the knowledge of what happens in the next book in the series.
  3. Which character do you like best? Why?
    1. I really don’t have a favorite character but I don't really like the character, Angel. She's just a 6 year old and she thinks she can lead the flock. When she doesn't get what she wants she tries to control their mind and change what their thinking. Sometimes it comes in handy when they're in trouble. But other times she doesn't use it for a good cause. She also tries to take over Max's spot as leader.
  4. Jeb say that Ari is Max’s brother, do you think that is true or not? Why?
    1. Yes, I do think it is true and to tell you the truth, I’ve done some research on it and I know for a fact that its true.
  5. What do you think of Anne?
    1. I just don’t like her, when she revealed that was Jeb’s boss I started to hate her and still do hate her though I do wonder what is going to happen to her later in the series.
  6. Who do you think The Voice is? Explain?
    1. Angel is for sure the voice, that I positive on. She has special abilities like reading people's minds and also can control people's minds so she could be influencing Max the whole time.
  7. Why do you think Ari wanted to ‘take’ Max away so badly?
    1. I think its an obsession that Ari has with Max as she is his sister and wants to the only one to be with her.
  8. Who do you think is going to end up with Max at the end of the whole series?
    1. To be honest, I’m going to Fang. It’s just like everyone says and see in the far future in the series.
  9. On the diabolical scale of 1 to 10, what do you rate of the fact that Max had been replaced by a substitute Max? Why?
    1. 7, I really can’t tell the difference between both Maxs but only their personalities.
  10. At the end of the story, what do you think of Jeb and The School now?
    1. I really can’t say anything on it but I do hate them both.


I think the interviews went very well. I managed to get two points of views of the book from a male and a female and a general outlook from each person. I think that Brinda has a better outlook on the story then Cody as he just skimmed through the book then actually read it when he confessed it.